Sunday, January 26, 2014

Paraphrasing


Remember when you are paraphrasing someone else's words and ideas, change the words but not the ideas.  Here's a picture to help you remember. :)








Page 135, Task 7, Practising Paraphrasing


Here are some example paraphrases created by previous LINC 7 students:

1.  Vaccines are safe for almost everyone although very rarely there are people who experience adverse reactions. (original)


  • Immunizations are considered safe for every single person even though they have negative effects for some.
  • Not very often, people have a negative reaction to vaccines.
  • Vaccines can cause severe reactions to a minority of people in rare cases.
  • Some people have bad reactions to vaccines. However, vaccines are okay for most people.
  • Vaccines are good for people, but some have a negative reaction to them.


2. Some mild side effects are experienced by most people after they are immunized. (original)



  • After immunization, most people usually have mild side effects from vaccines.
  • Most people  have mild side effects when they are vaccinated.
  • Mild side effects occur for some people after vaccination.
  • Even though there are people who have negative reactions to immunizations, they are still good for the majority.




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